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Elza Smal — Fri, 15 Jan 2010 14:43:01 +0000

jy skryf vreeslik goed… laat mens op plekke dink waar jy perdalks nie wou wees nie

Trevor Tyler — Fri, 15 Jan 2010 01:28:08 +0000

Your work is AMAZING!!!!!

Ilva Pieterse — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 22:55:48 +0000

Thank you, Michelle. Feedback is always appreciated

Michelle Freedman — Fri, 25 Dec 2009 17:55:43 +0000

Wow, your poems convey so much emotion and meaning so cleverly. And I like that last bit…”left that heap of despair on the floor between your feet.”

Damaria Senne — Wed, 26 Aug 2009 06:45:12 +0000

I I understood most of it and It’s lovely. THANKS.

Damaria Senne — Tue, 07 Jul 2009 10:37:59 +0000

Hey Ilva Pie

I didn’t understand the whole poem, ( due to not being so fluent in Afrikaans)but I liked what i did understand.

Nafisa — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 08:29:08 +0000

Now thats an interesting take on lists… I like.

Damaria Senne — Tue, 26 May 2009 19:35:49 +0000

Really nice. I like.

Chan — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 17:28:57 +0000

Hauntingly beautiful…..

MB — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 08:19:06 +0000

Thought this was a really good piece.

‘…every time I blink I am a little less of what I was before. And a little more of what I could’ve been.’ – Excellent!