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Comment on You, me, and the sea by Miles

Miles — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 00:20:45 +0000

“Just a sliver of the sea
Like a scar in the sands”

Beautiful imagery.

Comment on Fine-tuned by Miles

Miles — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 00:18:45 +0000

“You asked me why I was waiting
For something already long gone
And suddenly all of that aching
Disappeared in the song of a swan”

That’s beautiful.

Comment on I’m not depressed by Adam

Adam — Mon, 07 Nov 2011 09:29:07 +0000

I don’t usually read the poetry I come across on the web, but this caught my eye for some reason. I’m so glad I took the time to read. By far the most beautiful thing I’ve ever read. Makes me smile and brings a tear to my eye every time I read it. Thank you so much for putting into words what most people can only feel. You are extremely talented, and just know that you have absolutely made an impact on me. I look forward to reading more

Comment on Read them their writes by Tyler

Tyler — Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:12:05 +0000

This one’s my favorite.

Comment on Cocoon by Ilva Pieterse

Ilva Pieterse — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:00:59 +0000

I’m often concerned that readers don’t catch the play on words – it does seem rather obscured beneath the poem’s steady rhythm and rich imagery. I’ve come to think of it as a buried treaure – and you’re the first to have uncovered it according to my knowledge. Thank you for taking the time to really listen

Comment on Cocoon by Tyler

Tyler — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 21:33:14 +0000

Amazing. Third stanza blew me away.

Comment on I’m not depressed by Ilva Pieterse

Ilva Pieterse — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:46:01 +0000

Then my work here is done!

Comment on I’m not depressed by Miles

Miles — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:37:54 +0000

“The top of my lungs
You’re my talking in tongues
The motivational quote
In my suicide note”

You make me want to write.
Dope!

Comment on I’m not depressed by redericka

redericka — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 06:49:59 +0000

That was beautiful.

Comment on Read them their writes by Damaria Senne

Damaria Senne — Tue, 18 Jan 2011 10:42:04 +0000

nice poem. from a writer’s ppoint of view, it sounds scary though